800 - Competition page - copy text changes

src/app/components/pages/IsaacCompetition/content.ts

@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ export default {
         "Trophies for the winners",
         "£50 Amazon gift vouchers for the winners",
         "SOLIDWORKS CAD software licences for all finalists",
-        "An exclusive industry tour hosted by a partner organisation for the winners",
+        "An exclusive experience day hosted by a partner organisation for the winners",
         "Isaac Computer Science and partner merchandise for all finalists",
       ],
     },
@@ -115,28 +115,32 @@ export default {
       section: [
         "There are endless possibilities! We know how challenging it can be to start with a blank page, so here are a few ideas to spark your creativity:",
         [
-          "Develop an app or game that promotes healthy sleep habits",
-          "Propose a device concept that helps keep public spaces clean",
-          "Create a smart device for mental wellbeing",
+          "Present a concept for an application or game designed to encourage healthy sleep patterns.",
+          "Develop a device proposal aimed at keeping public spaces clean.",
+          "Suggest an idea for an intelligent device intended to support mental health and wellbeing.",
         ],
-        "These ideas are only the beginning – we can’t wait to see the innovative solutions you come up with!",
+        "These ideas are only the beginning – we can’t wait to see the innovative solutions you come up with! Keep in mind, you don’t need to build the final product; instead, record a video to showcase your idea or concept with designs and/or prototypes in any format you prefer.",
       ],
     },
     availableSupport: {
       title: "Available support",
       section: [
-        "Explore our selection of resources to support your Internet of Everything (IoE) device design:",
+        "To support your journey in designing Internet of Everything (IoE) devices, we offer a selection of valuable resources. These materials cover the fundamental aspects required for successful device/product development, offering insights into hardware, connectivity, security, and the broader implications of technology.",
+        "<strong>Key topics and resources:</strong>",
         [
-          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/sys_arch_embed_sys'>Embedded Systems</a>",
-          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/sys_arch_processor'>The processor</a>",
-          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/sys_arch_performance'>Factors affecting processor performance</a>",
-          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/sys_arch_memory'>RAM: Main memory</a>",
-          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/net_network_wired_wireless'>Wired and Wireless networks</a>",
-          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/net_sec_threats'>Cybersecurity: Network threats</a>",
-          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/topics/legislation'>Legislation</a>",
-          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/topics/impacts_of_tech'>Impacts of technology</a>",
+          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/sys_arch_embed_sys'>Embedded Systems</a> – Explore the principles and applications of embedded systems, which are crucial for IoE device functionality.",
+          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/sys_arch_processor'>The processor</a> – Understand the role of processors in managing device operations and processing data efficiently.",
+          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/sys_arch_performance'>Factors affecting processor performance</a> – Learn about the various elements that influence processor speed and effectiveness in IoE devices.",
+          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/sys_arch_memory'>RAM: Main memory</a> – Discover the importance of main memory (RAM) in ensuring smooth performance and data handling.",
+          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/net_network_wired_wireless'>Wired and Wireless networks</a> – Investigate the connectivity options available for IoE devices, including both wired and wireless networks.",
+          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/concepts/net_sec_threats'>Cybersecurity: Network threats</a> – Delve into the cybersecurity challenges and network threats that IoE devices may face.",
+          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/topics/legislation'>Legislation</a> – Review the legal considerations and regulations impacting IoE technologies.",
+          "<a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/topics/impacts_of_tech'>Impacts of technology</a> – Reflect on the social, economic, and environmental impacts of technological advancements in the IoE sector.",
         ],
-        "Check out our live booster sessions and discovery events <a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/events'>here</a> to enhance your subject knowledge and discover career opportunities in computer science.",
+        "<strong>Learning opportunities</strong>",
+        "Cisco and STEM Learning present a free, self-paced course <a href='https://www.netacad.com/courses/introduction-iot?courseLang=en-US&instance_id=37015267-e958-447e-9dfb-853590cc67e1'>‘Introduction to IoT and Digital Transformation’</a>. This course serves as an excellent starting point to gain foundational knowledge about the Internet of Things and the Internet of Everything.",
+        "<strong>Events and further exploration</strong>",
+        "To further enhance your subject knowledge and explore career pathways in computer science, we encourage you to participate in our live booster sessions and discovery events. Find more details and register <a href='https://isaaccomputerscience.org/events'>here</a>.",
       ],
     },
     video: {
@@ -266,7 +270,20 @@ export default {
     industry: {
       title: "Industry partners",
       section: [
-        "<strong>Birmingham City University</strong> is once again a key partner of the competition and will proudly host the <strong>final at their Innovation Fest in Birmingham this May.</strong> This event offers students and teachers an excellent chance to take part in an exciting showcase of creativity, innovation, and future talent.",
+        "<strong>Birmingham City University</strong> continues its important role as a leading partner in the competition. This year, the university will once again host the <strong>final at their Innovation Fest in Birmingham this May.</strong> The festival offers students and teachers a chance to engage in a vibrant celebration of creativity, innovation, and emerging talent.",
+        "Thank you to our industry partners for supporting this competition with judges and prizes. Our thanks go to:",
+        [
+          "AstraZeneca",
+          "BT",
+          "Cisco",
+          "Civil Aviation Authority",
+          "Dassault Systèmes",
+          "Herd Consulting",
+          "JLR",
+          "Kainos",
+          "McLaren Racing and Automotive",
+          "Rolls Royce",
+        ],
       ],
     },
     termsAndConditions: {